Tutor profile: Alan W.
Bob wrote this letter to his boss. Demonstrate how it could be condensed and written more efficiently. "We did not meet the quota today. Jeremy was late to work. Not enough quilts were produced. There was no one running the stitching machine, which is Jeremy's job."
"We did not meet our quota of quilt production today because Jeremy, the quilt-stitcher, was late." (various answers accepted)
Subject: Film and Theater
Which member of a film crew is responsible for making sure things like the placement of objects in a room and the state of the actors' clothing is consistent and unchanging throughout all takes?
The script supervisor.
What word should be replaced in this sentence? "Despite their clear desire to fix the system, their proposed solutions seemed unlikely to affect the necessary change."
"Affect" should be "effect". Effect, as a verb, means to cause to come into being.
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