Tutor profile: Katherine P.
Hours, and hours of driving lay ahead of us and still we were calm in the car. There was nothing we could say; about the weather that would make the drive anymore interesting. Over and over and over again my sister tapped on the window. It was driving me insane. Except that my parents had already seemed annoyed and I dared not disturb them any further while in such a confined space. (Take this passage and edit it so that it is more focused and grammatically correct)
Hours (and hours) of driving lay ahead of us and still [,] we were calm in the car. There was nothing we could say (;) about the weather that would make the drive anymore interesting. (Over and over and over again) My sister [constantly] tapped on the window it was driving me insane. (Except that) [M]y parents had already seemed annoyed and I dared not disturb them (any further) while in such a confined space. (_) = things that were cut out [_] = things that were changed or added There can be variations of changes made to make this more to the point.
Subject: European History
Name a significant change that took place during the rule of Henry VIII.
While in power Henry VIII broke with the church of England, while he did so in order to be able to divorce his wife Catherine of Aragon, this move put him in control of a new church and therefore changed the way England was ruled from that point forward.
(True or False) The slope of the line 2x + 2y = 2 is equal to 2
False - The slope is equal to -1
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