Tutor profile: Whitney T.
I just completed my first draft on a paper about why I believe Abraham Lincoln made a greater impact on the United States of America during his presidency than George Washington. Upon reading it, I was disappointed that my case doesn't come across very strong. Are there any tips you can give me to make a more powerful argument?
First off, well done finishing the first draft! You've gotten through the hardest part of the assignment. To answer your question, I have listed three suggestions to strengthen your case: 1. Rather than ignoring George Washington's contributions or attempting to claim he didn't make any difference in the United States, acknowledge the impact he made before focusing on Abraham Lincoln. Doing so will help ground your argument in reality, gaining you credibility with your audience. 2. Examine the examples you give for how Abraham Lincoln impacted the United States. Make sure that they are specific and clear, including numerical facts where appropriate. 3. Eliminate "fluff" about Abraham Lincoln. Stick to giving a string of clear examples of how he impacted America rather than making generalized statements about what a "great leader" he was. I hope this helps!
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