Tutor profile: Amanda G.
What is the best way to craft a hook to an essay?
Avoid quotations and cliches; stick to real-life examples that connect to the thematic qualities of the subject at hand. For example, in an essay arguing for the use of GMOs, hook the reader with an historical example about the initial resistance of citizens to the use of another beneficial technology, like vaccinations.
Subject: US History
How would one describe the evolution of the Republican Party in American politics following the passage of the 13th through 15th Amendments?
The GOP, after accomplishing its primary goals of eradicating slavery, progressively evolved to become the party of business as it sought new constituents and purposes. This evolution resulted in a retreat from its title as the progressive party in the two-party system. As the Democratic Party then increasingly staked out a progressive stance, with the Republican progressive Theodore Roosevelt losing the election to the Democratic progressive Woodrow Wilson, the Republican Party evolved to hold more conservative stances in response.
What are the three key components of an above-par essay?
Concision, an analytical statement for every piece of evidence, and a clearly laid out thesis statement that can be verbally summarized in a few sentences or less
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