Tutor profile: Victoria V.
What can we do to make this paragraph shorter and less daunting to the reader? Since it lasts more than one page, a reader would be less likely to read it in its entirety.
I can reread the paragraph and see if my topics naturally split anywhere and turn my one paragraph into two more-focused paragraphs.
What devices does the author use in the structure of the poem to convey [a theme]?
The author uses enjambment and the rhyming pattern ABAB to convert this theme.
How can you look for transitional words and phrases similar to "Additionally"?
I could look on thesaurus.com, or an in-print thesaurus, for "Additionally". Also, I could use a transitional phrase specific to my content like "In addition to [this study]" and "[This person] also does...".
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