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Within their community, a new hope arose; based on renewed trust and a shared sense of responsibility for the mistakes of the past. What change, if any should be made, to the sentence above?
"Hope arose based on"
Some people prefer bright yellow mustard on their hot dogs; others, prefer ketchup, relish, onion, or even chili. What, if any, are the grammatical errors in the sentence above?
"Dogs; others," should be changed to "dogs; others".