Tutor profile: Parmjot G.
Subject: World History
Which major technological innovations made World History more connected than ever before?
1. Radio: broadcasts allowed news to be transferred quickly to other areas. 2. Television: videos to go along with news stories that could travel across the globe. 3. The Internet: allowed individuals to connect on a personal level across the globe at unprecedented levels. News from other areas of the world can now travel instantly to individuals, without the need for radio and television broadcasters.
Subject: European History
What were the two of the major reasons that World War I descended into trench warfare?
1. The Maxim Gun: this was an automatic machine gun that required immense adaptation of strategies to protect soldiers. 2. Refusal of military generals to change strategies of fighting in open battlefields. Soldiers in an open battlefield would be easy targets for machine guns.
How can I write an effective thesis for an argumentative essay?
A good thesis is one that allows the reader to know what you will discuss in the paper and will help the paper flow. The following method will help construct an effective thesis. The most important point is that an outline must be completed in advance. Create the outline for the body of the essay and your main arguments first. Then use those arguments in your thesis. For example, if the essay will argue that University educations should be publicly funded, and the main arguments are that it would not matter how expensive it could be to the government since students end up in debts they are unable to pay, and that not all University degrees end in jobs, a good thesis could be as follows: While publicly funding University education would be expensive, it is important to do so since many students end up with large amounts of debt they are unable to pay, and because not all University degrees end with jobs. This thesis addresses your main points and lets the reader know what the essay will discuss very clearly.
needs and Parmjot will reply soon.